Is there a piece of furniture in your home that holds a special memory? If so, what is it?
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Is there a piece of furniture in your home that holds a special memory? If so, what is it?
There are some furnitures that I bought when I got married.
One of those things is the refregerator.
It is still live in my kitchen, but It has some problem.
It has 4doors. One door has a problem that It sometimes used not to close perpectly,
Especially, It is the worst thing that this part is ice box.
So, When I back to home from work, I could find the freezing floor around the refrigiator.
Also I feel freezing my mind as the floor.
Other problem is the color matches.
Because the fridge gained some flower print when I moved to this house.
The move helper dropped one door. so I had to requeset A/S service.
But the A/S service told me that they had any same material due to old.
(I couldn\'t acknowledge the fact. I thought it was a babay, because It is just 8 years-old.)
So I had to give up the original door post to flower print door.
However, the fridge still live in my house and will live same.
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Hello, Stella! The fridge must be something you cherish since it was one of the first things you bought when you got married. As long as it still works, I guess you can still keep it. ^^ Enjoy your day!
~. Jewel
There are some furnitures that I bought when I got married.
>>There are some pieces of furniture that I bought when I got married.
One of those things is the refregerator.
One of those things is the refregerator.
>>One of them is the refrigerator.
It is still live in my kitchen, but It has some problem.
It is still live in my kitchen, but It has some problem.
>>It is still in my kitchen, but it has some problems now.
It has 4doors.
It has 4doors.
>>It has four doors.
OR
>>It is a four-door refrigerator.
One door has a problem that It sometimes used not to close perpectly,
>>One door has a problem and it sometimes doesn\'t close properly.
Especially, It is the worst thing that this part is ice box.
Especially, It is the worst thing that this part is ice box.
>>The worst thing about it is that this part is the ice box.
So, When I back to home from work, I could find the freezing floor around the refrigiator.
>>So, when I come back home from work, I find the floor around the refrigerator frozen.
Also I feel freezing my mind as the floor.
Also I feel freezing my mind as the floor.
>I also feel as frozen as the floor.
Other problem is the color matches.
Other problem is the color matches.
>>The other problem is the color.
Because the fridge gained some flower print when I moved to this house.
Because the fridge gained some flower print when I moved to this house.
>>The fridge got some flower prints when I moved to this house.
The move helper dropped one door. so I had to requeset A/S service.
The move helper dropped one door. so I had to requeset A/S service.
>>The mover dropped one door, so I had to request A/S service.
But the A/S service told me that they had any same material due to old.
But the A/S service told me that they had any same material due to old.
>>But the A/S service told me that they didn\'t have the same design anymore because it was old.
(I couldn\'t acknowledge the fact. I thought it was a babay, because It is just 8 years-old.)
(I couldn\'t acknowledge the fact. I thought it was a babay, because It is just 8 years-old.)
>>I couldn\'t accept their reason because I thought it was still new, since it\'s only 8 years old.
So I had to give up the original door post to flower print door.
So I had to give up the original door post to flower print door.
>>So I had to give up the original door design and replace it with a flower print door.
However, the fridge still live in my house and will live same.
However, the fridge still live in my house and will live same.
>>However, the fridge is still in my house and will stay the same.
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