Is there a piece of furniture in your home that holds a special memory? If so, what is it?
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In my home, there are some furniture. those have each story.
For example, I tryed hard to search couch that is my style. so, I visited many couch shop and I even visited couch factory and head office. I finally found the couch that I like.
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Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
In my home, there are some furniture. those have each story.
>> In my home, there is some furniture, and each piece has its own story.
For example, I tryed hard to search couch that is my style.
>> For example, I tried hard to find a couch that suited my style.
so, I visited many couch shop and I even visited couch factory and head office.
>> I visited many furniture stores and even went to a couch factory and a head office.
I finally found the couch that I like.
>> Finally, I found the couch that I liked.
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