Is there a political person/politician that you look up to? If yes, who is it? And tell something ab
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I don\'t have any political persons to look up to. They always have taken only personal gains in South Korea. So I\'ve never seen it before that ones who should devote to their country. On the other hand, there are people who are good and virtuous.
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Hello Elic! Thank you once again for taking the time to answer your homework. I am very happy of your progress in learning English so far. Keep it up and never give up. As Ramana Maharshi once said, \"No one succeeds without effort. Those who succeed owe their success to perseverance.\" :)
>> I don\'t look up to any politicians.
They always have taken only personal gains in South Korea.
>> They only always have taken personal gains in South Korea.
So I\'ve never seen it before that ones who should devote to their country.
>> I\'ve never seen someone who is devoted to his country.
On the other hand, there are people who are good and virtuous.
>> Correct.
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