Is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Or should you never give up?

2015-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It’s an individual decision. There is no magic number of trying or proper time to give up. Each person has their own pain threshold, what might be bearable for some will be way too much for others. It’s a matter of whether you are prepared to give up or willing to suffer through in order to achieve your goals. Is it perseverance or is it obsession? No one can judge if you are obsessed or determined. People might ask you “don’t you think you should give up now?” It is only you who can answer the question. When giving up, you go back to being normal.It must be like being let out of prison in some sense, however, you will lose your dream and there will no further hope. We have to accept as it is. When is “enough is enough”? I think the answer is when the pain of trying is worse than the pain of giving up. Don’t let anyone make you doubt yourself. Do what is right for you. You don’t need to be embarrassed at your continuous trials. Only you will know when enough is enough.

강사 첨삭

T.G.I.F. Sir [이름]!

Inspiring composition. ^^

I so love this one. ^^

I learned something from what you wrote below.

There are people who don\'t want to give up until the end.

It seems like they feel satisfied that they did their best all throughout their life.

I appreciate your time and effort.

Teacher Nina


It’s an individual decision.

>> correct

There is no magic number of trying or proper time to give up.

>> correct

Each person has their own pain threshold, what might be bearable for some will be way too much for others.

>> Each person has their own pain threshold, what might be bearable for some or will be way too much for others.

It’s a matter of whether you are prepared to give up or willing to suffer through in order to achieve your goals.

>> correct

Is it perseverance or is it obsession?

>> correct

No one can judge if you are obsessed or determined.

>> correct

People might ask you “don’t you think you should give up now?”

>> correct

It is only you who can answer the question.

>> correct

When giving up, you go back to being normal.

>> correct

It must be like being let out of prison in some sense, however, you will lose your dream and there will no further hope.

>> It must be like ,letting you out of prison in some sense, however, you will lose your dream and there will no further hope.

We have to accept as it is.

>> correct 

When is “enough is enough”?

>> correct

I think the answer is when the pain of trying is worse than the pain of giving up.

>> correct

Don’t let anyone make you doubt yourself.

>> correct

Do what is right for you.

>> correct

You don’t need to be embarrassed at your continuous trials.

>> correct

Only you will know when enough is enough.

>> correct

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