Is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Or should you never give up?

2015-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

I think that there is a right time to give up and stop trying. Especially, national examination is one of the examples. I have seen many people who had studied to take a national test. They had studied from three years to over five years. We often say that if someone does not pass the exam in three years, he or she has to give it up because it means that he is not suitable to the test or he is lack of fortune. In addition, he has to other things to make money. I think that after he did his best he did not pass the exam, it is waste of time. I believe that he had better do other things as soon as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]! Thank you for sharing your ideas regarding our essay. I also agree that there is a time to stop from trying. It doesn\'t mean that you are giving up. Instead, you are letting go of something that is not really meant for you. Anyway, you have a wonderful afternoon.^^ ~Kelly^^ I think that there is a right time to give up and stop trying. >> Correct. Especially, national examination is one of the examples. >> Especially for national examination, that is one example. I have seen many people who had studied to take a national test. >> Correct. They had studied from three years to over five years. >> They studied for three to five years. We often say that if someone does not pass the exam in three years, he or she has to give it up because it means that he is not suitable to the test or he is lack of fortune. >> We often say that if someone does not pass the exam in three years, he or she has to give it up because it means that he is not suitable for the test or he has no good luck. In addition, he has to other things to make money. >> In addition, he has to do other things to make money. I think that after he did his best he did not pass the exam, it is waste of time. >> I think that if he did not pass the exam after giving his best, it is a waste of time. I believe that he had better do other things as soon as possible. >> Correct.

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