Is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Or should you never give up?

2015-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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In Korea, you should pass a national bar exam which takes place once a year in order to become a lawyer, a prosecutor, or a judge until recently, although you can go to a law school these days. There are no prerequisites or qualifications to take the bar exam. So, even if you are poor or have no high education, you can apply for the exam. Becoming a lawyer guarantees your future in terms of social status, reputation, and personal wealth. So many people bet their lives for the exam only by studying and taking the exam for years and years. They usually rent a small studio near the cram school to take classes and spend their golden times studying only.They live like a prisoner. They rarely go out, wear only one cloth, and don’t get their hair cut. They endure all these hardships only for the jackpot of passing the exam which can be a life change event. If you pass it, it couldn’t be better. However, there are some people continuously fail until they turn like 50 years old.

강사 첨삭

Great day to you Sir [이름]!

Yipee!

One more day to go before the weekend. Yipee!

I am so happy that you always send a composition.

I\'m learning a lot of things.

It is really difficult to pass the bar exam.

There are some people who even commit suicide after failing several times.

But of course, like what you said below, there are some who don\'t give up.

Thanks for your time and effort.
Teacher Nina


In Korea, you should pass a national bar exam which takes place once a year in order to become a lawyer, a prosecutor, or a judge until recently, although you can go to a law school these days.

>> correct

There are no prerequisites or qualifications to take the bar exam.

>> correct

So, even if you are poor or have no high education, you can apply for the exam.

>> correct

>> OR: So, even if you are poor or you weren\'t able to have a higher education, you can apply for the exam.

Becoming a lawyer guarantees your future in terms of social status, reputation, and personal wealth.

>> correct

So many people bet their lives for the exam only by studying and taking the exam for years and years.

>> correct

They usually rent a small studio near the cram school to take classes and spend their golden times studying only.

>> correct

They live like a prisoner.

>> correct

They rarely go out, wear only one cloth, and don’t get their hair cut.

>> correct

They endure all these hardships only for the jackpot of passing the exam which can be a life change event.

>> correct

If you pass it, it couldn’t be better.

>> correct

However, there are some people continuously fail until they turn like 50 years old.

>> correct

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