Is there a sport that you would like to try?
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I would like to learn virus kinds of summer season sports like swimming and surfing. I heard that If I can do these sports, the trip’s quality would be increased, especially when I go to a vacation spot having beautiful beaches or a resort with a swimming pool. So in this summer, I’ll overcome the fear of water and learn swimming!
Similar above, I would like to be good at snowboard. I tried it last winter for the first time and It was not easy. But I liked it. So I’ll enjoy it every winter!
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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleI would like to learn virus kinds of summer season sports like swimming and surfing.
>> I would like to learn various kinds of summer season sports like swimming and surfing.
I heard that If I can do these sports, the trip’s quality would be increased, especially when I go to a vacation spot having beautiful beaches or a resort with a swimming pool.
>> CORRECT!
So in this summer, I’ll overcome the fear of water and learn swimming!
So in this summer, I’ll overcome the fear of water and learn swimming!
>> CORRECT!
Similar above, I would like to be good at snowboard.
Similar above, I would like to be good at snowboard.
>> Similar above, I would like to be good at snowboarding.
I tried it last winter for the first time and It was not easy.
>> CORRECT!
But I liked it.
>> CORRECT!
So I’ll enjoy it every winter!
>> CORRECT!
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