Is there a typical traditional drink in your city? What is it made from?
학생이 쓴 원문
1.I think korea typical traditional drink is dongdong-ju and soju.
I don\'t like drink. because I\'m a light dirnker.
but korea people love alcohol so sometimes I drink soju.
I don\'t know another country peole.
they like drink or hate.
teacher means alcohol ?
is that right?
2.I have no idea
I guess...
each region of korea factorys are making dongdong-ju and soju.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jo!
Happy New Yea, Buddy!
I am happy to see your first homework.
Anyway, I am not a habitual drinker, too. But, recently, I drank soju with my friend and that was my second time to drink. Haha!
Here are the corrections.
I think korea typical traditional drink is dongdong-ju and soju.
>>> I think Korea\'s typical traditional drinks are dongdong-ju and soju.
I don\'t like drink. because I\'m a light dirnker.
>>> I don\'t like drinking too much alcohol because I\'m a light drinker.
but korea people love alcohol so sometimes I drink soju.
>>> But Korean people love alcohol, so, sometimes, I drink soju.
I don\'t know another country peole. they like drink or hate.
>>> I don\'t know in another country\'s people if they like or hate drinking alcohol.
each region of korea factorys are making dongdong-ju and soju.
>>> Each region in Korea has factories making dongdong-ju and soju.
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