Is there a way to overcome phobia?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is general that people think someone who has phobia should overcome it and exposing to the certain subject for which he or she has phobia step by step is usually considered the best way to overcome it. In my case, however, I think it\'s better to admit that sometimes. In a modern society, a person have several minor disease such as allergy, athlete\'s foot and so on. Also, people who has such a minor disease don\'t spend one\'s energy so much overcoming it. I think a phobia for a certain object or situation is like a petty disease, which means it doesn\'t have significant influence on one\'s living and there is no need to spend time and money to eradicate it.
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much for answering your homework for today. I definitely agree with your great composition. Phobia is something that we just have to accept.
Grammar and vocabulary looks great! Keep up the great work!
I\'m looking forward to our next class again.
~Teacher Eve.
It is general that people think someone who has phobia should overcome it and exposing to the certain subject for which he or she has phobia step by step is usually considered the best way to overcome it. >>It is general for some people to think that someone who has phobia should overcome it and be exposed to the certain subject for which he or she has phobia. A step by step is usually considered the best way to overcome it.
In my case, however, I think it\'s better to admit that sometimes. In a modern society, a person have several minor disease such as allergy, athlete\'s foot and so on.
>> In my case, however, I think it\'s better to admit that sometimes in a modern society, a person who have several minor disease such as allergies, athlete\'s foot and so on.
Also, people who has such a minor disease don\'t spend one\'s energy so much overcoming it.
>> Also, people who have a minor disease to not spend so much energy to overcome it.
I think a phobia for a certain object or situation is like a petty disease, which means it doesn\'t have significant influence on one\'s living and there is no need to spend time and money to eradicate it.
>> I think a phobia for a certain object or situation is like a petty disease, which means it doesn\'t have a significant influence on one\'s lifestyle and there is no need to spend time and money to eradicate it.
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