Is there always another explanation or another point of view?

2015-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think there is always another explanation or another point of view. Peoples are various. We think different ways at all time and all the situation. So when it comes to encountering some accidents or problem, we can make the various point of view. Especially in a business situation, we definitely need another point of view. That view gives a good inspiration and this lead good strategy. For example, the department store suffers from the people who ride the elevator don't feel comfortable. So the board members are continuously considered how to change this situation. At that time, the clean women said "if there were a mirror in elevator, they might concentrate to see mirror" So they set the mirror on the elevator, customer no more irritated to wait on the elevator. So we definitely need another point of view.

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Hi, [이름]! A great Friday to you! How\'s your day going so far? Thank you for writing in our composition board again. Having a fresh point of view in a situation is always helpful especially if you\'ve been dealing with that situation for quite some time. Most of the time, people tend to look at a certain problem up close that\'s why sometimes, they fail to see the whole picture. At times, you have to move away and look at things in another angle and interpret things in a different manner. Open-mindedness is actually the key in this matter. More often than not, it\'s difficult to accept other people\'s point of view. Having this kind of attitude could actually open not only our eyes but our minds to different possibilities and different solutions. I hope you have a great Friday and a wonderful weekend [이름]. I\'ll see you again on Monday. ~Teacher Charry (^^,) I think there is always another explanation or another point of view. >> I think there is always another explanation or another point of view  in every situation. Peoples are various. >> People think differently in various ways. We think different ways at all time and all the situation.>> We think in different ways all the time and in all situation. So when it comes to encountering some accidents or problem, we can make the various point of view. >> So when it comes to encountering some accidents or problems, we can come up with various point of views. Especially in a business situation, we definitely need another point of view. >> CORRECT! OR >> Especially in the business aspect, we definitely need another point of view. That view gives a good inspiration and this lead good strategy. >> That view gives a good inspiration which leads to a good strategy. For example, the department store suffers from the people who ride the elevator don\'t feel comfortable. >> For example, in a department store, people suffer from the uncomfortability of riding an elevator. So the board members are continuously considered how to change this situation. >> So the board members continuously consider how to change this situation. At that time, the clean women said \"if there were a mirror in elevator, they might concentrate to see mirror\" So they set the mirror on the elevator, customer no more irritated to wait on the elevator. >> At that time, a woman said \"if there is a mirror inside the elevator, people might concentrate on looking at their reflections in the mirror\". So they placed a mirror in the elevator, and the customers are not irritated being inside the elevator anymore. So we definitely need another point of view. >> That\'s the reason why we always need another point of view.

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