Is there an instance that you did something bad but the result ended up good? Give me and example.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a student, I should have taken a crowded bus to go to the school.
Sometimes I encountered a elderly passenger who has a trouble to stand in a bus.
At that time, I yielded my seat to a elderly person.
It looked like a good intent, but it was not. I did it just for me.
If I didn\'t yield my seat, then I would feel sorry for her.
I did something selfish, but the result ended up good. (I hope so.)
강사 첨삭
Great job, Ian!
I think that like what you have said, you did it for yourself to feel good and not be guilty of not letting her sit, but the result was still good because you were able to help that person. Also, who knows, maybe you were able to inspire others to do the same in the future.
-T. Caitlyn
When I was a student, I should have taken a crowded bus to go to the school.
>> When I was still a student, I took a crowded bus going to school.
Sometimes I encountered a elderly passenger who has a trouble to stand in a bus.
Sometimes I encountered a elderly passenger who has a trouble to stand in a bus.
>> One time, I encountered an elderly passenger who has trouble standing up on the bus.
At that time, I yielded my seat to a elderly person.
At that time, I yielded my seat to a elderly person.
>> At that time, I yielded my seat to that elderly person.
It looked like a good intent, but it was not.
It looked like a good intent, but it was not.
>> It may look like good intent but it was not.
I did it just for me.
>> CORRECT
If I didn\'t yield my seat, then I would feel sorry for her.
If I didn\'t yield my seat, then I would feel sorry for her.
>> CORRECT
I did something selfish, but the result ended up good. (I hope so.)
I did something selfish, but the result ended up good. (I hope so.)
>> CORRECT
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