Is there any connection between the person\'s style of life and the duration of his life?
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If people don\'t have an accidental death, I think there is some connection.
Suppose there are a person who does everything he wants to do and a person who thinks about his health.
I think the latter will live longer if their health is similar.
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If people don\'t have an accidental death, I think there is some connection.
>> CORRECT!
Suppose there are a person who does everything he wants to do and a person who thinks about his health.
>> Suppose there is a person who does everything he wants to do and a person who thinks about his health.
I think the latter will live longer if their health is similar.
>> CORRECT!
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