Is there any holiday in other country that you wish Korea is also celebrating?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t have any idea about holiday that l wish Korea celebrating more compare with other country.
Because I don\'t know well about other country\'s holiday. Besides important holidays are in common each country like Thanks giving, New year,Christmas,Father\'s &mother\'s day...
First of all, I think there are already enough holidays in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [이름]!
I don\'t have any idea about holiday that l wish Korea celebrating more compare with other country. Because I don\'t know well about other country\'s holiday.
>>> I don\'t have any idea about a holiday that l wish Korea is celebrating more compared with other countries because I don\'t know well about other country\'s holiday.
Besides important holidays are in common each country like Thanks giving, New year,Christmas,Father\'s &mother\'s day...
>>> Besides, important holidays are common in each country like Thanks giving, New year, Christmas, Father\'s & mother\'s day, etc.
>>> Besides, important holidays are common in each country like Thanks giving, New year, Christmas, Father\'s & mother\'s day, etc.
First of all, I think there are already enough holidays in Korea.
>>> correct
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