Is there any invention that has changed your life most recently?
학생이 쓴 원문
The Apple Watch that I bought last week is changed my life most recently.
Ordinary, I don’t know if I get a call.
After buying the Apple Watch, I get a call immediately and check the text messages even if the phone is in my bag.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna. I\'m glad that you like the new gadget you bought. Gadget and technologies are useful these days. Use them wisely. Keep safe! I will see you in class.~ T. Lyn
The Apple Watch that I bought last week is changed my life most recently.
>>The Apple Watch I bought last week has changed my life recently.
Ordinary, I don’t know if I get a call.
Ordinary, I don’t know if I get a call.
>>Usually, I don\'t know if someone is calling me.
After buying the Apple Watch, I get a call immediately and check the text messages even if the phone is in my bag.
After buying the Apple Watch, I get a call immediately and check the text messages even if the phone is in my bag.
>>As soon as I buy the Apple Watch, I can receive calls and check the text messages right on the watch even if my phone is in my bag.
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