Is there any particular food that you don\'t eat due to personal or religious beliefs?

2024-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I actually have no chioce religion. I also think religion is very important parts of the human life. but I don\'t have the confidence to believe it faithfully. i\'m just interested in buddism. as i mentioned before i love hisroty, huddism has a lot to do with korean history.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Dan!
The reason why I asked you that question is because some people do not eat certain foods because of their religion or philosophical beliefs. Like for example, there are groups of people who do not eat \"PORK\" because it is against their beliefs. while others do not eat pork because of health issues.
Have a good afternoon!
Aki~

I actually have no chioce religion.
>>> I don\'t have any religion.

I also think religion is very important parts of the human life.
>>> However, I also think that religion can be a very important aspect of human life.

but I don\'t have the confidence to believe it faithfully.
>>> CORRECT!

i\'m just interested in buddism.
>>> I\'m just interested in Buddhism.

 as i mentioned before i love hisroty, huddism has a lot to do with korean history
>>>  As I mentioned before i love history, Buddhism has a lot to do with Korean history

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