Is there any policy that you don\'t like in you part-time job? What is it and why?
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I have part-time job about cashier and teacher\'s aide. They don\'t have much of policy. In cashier part-time job, I will do greeting for customer, wearing uniform and counting last money when my finish time. This policy is must have to do. So I don\'t hate this policy. And, in teacher\'s aide part-time job, it doesn\'t have any policy. All my two job do not have much policy. So I can feel free and enjoy to go my job.
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Hello, [이름]ji!
Thank you for sharing about it. I think that is good. You don\'t need to feel pressured at work because you have lesser policies. Anyway, I hope you\'ll have a great weekend!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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CORRECTIONS AND SUGGESTIONS:
1. I have part-time job about cashier and teacher\'s aide.
>> I have part-time jobs which is a cashier and a teacher\'s aide.
2. They don\'t have much of policy.
>> CORRECT!
3. In cashier part-time job, I will do greeting for customer, wearing uniform and counting last money when my finish time.
>> In my part-time job as a cashier, I greet the customers, wear a uniform and counting the last money when my shift is over.
4. This policy is must have to do. So I don\'t hate this policy.
>> These policies are a must have so, I don\'t hate these policies.
5. And, in teacher\'s aide part-time job, it doesn\'t have any policy.
>> And in my part-time job as a teacher\'s aide, it doesn\'t have any policy.
6. All my two job do not have much policy.
>> All my two jobs do not have much policy.
7. So I can feel free and enjoy to go my job
>> So I can feel free and enjoy going to my job.
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