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It will be disastrous if I lose my job.

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I might do other things such as going on a travel, going hiking, and reading books when I am between jobs temporarily.

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>> I might do other things such as travelling, going hiking and reading books when I am between jobs temporarily.

However, if I’m unemployed without any job offer or concrete plans like studying, I won’t be able to feel at ease with the situation.

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If I live alone, I can relax and take time to get a job.

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However, I have a family to support and, like other ordinary households, my family cannot endure for a long time without incomes.

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Above all, regardless of how much we earn from our jobs, we will feel uneasy and worried when we are not employed.

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Especially in the Korean society, a man as a husband is expected to play a critical role in the household.

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A man should be strong, support his family financially and spiritually, and be a role model of his children.

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If we are unemployed, we will not only simply lose the source of income, but also be regarded as incapable men who are not respected even by your family.

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The labor market is not flexible.

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