Is there much interesting architecture in your country?
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In Korea, there is a special architecture. It is called Seok-gool-am. It was built more than ten centuries. But it doesn\'t have moss on the architecture. I think that it is the most interesting architecture in Korea.
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In Korea, there is a special architecture. It is called Seok-gool-am.
>> In Korea, there is a special type of architecture used in building the structure called Seok-gool-am.
It was built more than ten centuries. But it doesn\'t have moss on the architecture.
>> It was built more than ten centuries ago. But the structure doesn\'t have moss on it.
I think that it is the most interesting architecture in Korea.
>> I think that it is the most interesting construction in Korea.
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