Is there something that you’ve dreamed of doing for a long time? Why haven’t you done it?
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Good morning, beautiful girl! I hope your day goes well. ^^ Thank you for this composition.
Work hard so one day you would be able to study in the US. I\'ll cheer for you all the way! ^_^
~T.Avery
I have dreamed of traveling the US for a long time.
>> I have dreamed of traveling to the US for a long time.
In the internet, I can get lots of information about there.
>> In the internet, I can get lots of information about that place.
Also, the more I search the information, the more I wish to travel there.
>> CORRECT
However, to go the US, it costs long time, but I don\'t have such a time because I have to go to school.
>> However, going to the US takes a lot of time, but I don\'t have that much time because I have to go to school.
Some people ask me, \"why do you wish to travel th US?\"
>> CORRECT
Actually, there are not any specific reasons.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Actually, there are no specific reasons.
I juse love the peaceful mood of there.
>> I juse love the peaceful mood there.
It can be just my fantasy, but I hope to check whether my fantasy of the US is true.
>> CORRECT
I wish I can go travel to the US someday!!!
>> CORRECT
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