Is there something that you’ve dreamed of doing for a long time? Why haven’t you done it?

2020-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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I have dreamed of traveling the US for a long time. In the internet, I can get lots of information about there. Also, the more I search the information, the more I wish to travel there. However, to go the US, it costs long time, but I don\'t have such a time because I have to go to school. Some people ask me, \"why do you wish to travel th US?\" Actually, there are not any specific reasons. I juse love the peaceful mood of there. It can be just my fantasy, but I hope to check whether my fantasy of the US is true. I wish I can go travel to the US someday!!!

강사 첨삭

Good morning, beautiful girl! I hope your day goes well. ^^ Thank you for this composition.

Work hard so one day you would be able to study in the US. I\'ll cheer for you all the way! ^_^

~T.Avery

I have dreamed of traveling the US for a long time.

>> I have dreamed of traveling to the US for a long time.

In the internet, I can get lots of information about there.

>> In the internet, I can get lots of information about that place.

Also, the more I search the information, the more I wish to travel there.

>> CORRECT

However, to go the US, it costs long time, but I don\'t have such a time because I have to go to school.

>> However, going to the US takes a lot of time, but I don\'t have that much time because I have to go to school.

Some people ask me, \"why do you wish to travel th US?\"

>> CORRECT

Actually, there are not any specific reasons.

>> CORRECT

OR>> Actually, there are no specific reasons.

I juse love the peaceful mood of there.

>> I juse love the peaceful mood there.

It can be just my fantasy, but I hope to check whether my fantasy of the US is true.

>> CORRECT

I wish I can go travel to the US someday!!!

>> CORRECT

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