Is there something you wish you could do with your free time but can\'t?
학생이 쓴 원문
For sure, I really want to play a basketball with my old friends outside. But we can\'t do it in this pandemic situation. We had played it at middle and high school during every lunch break time, And we used to play it when we became an adult, So I miss it.
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For sure, I really want to play a basketball with my old friends outside.
>> For sure, I really want to play basketball with my old friends outside.
But we can\'t do it in this pandemic situation.
>> Unfortunately, we can\'t do it due to the pandemic.
We had played it at middle and high school during every lunch break time.
>> We used to play it a lot during break time when I was a middle school and high school student.
And we used to play it when we became an adult, So I miss it.
>> We still play it even if we\'re already adults so I miss it.
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