Is there something you wish you could do with your free time but can’t?
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Is there something you wish you could do with your free time but can’t?
I have many things which I want to do in my free time.
But I can\'t do in my limited free time what I want to do everything.
For example, I want to learn piano and I want to study English more.
If I use my free time to be busy, it is not to enjoy my free time.
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I think most people don\'t have that much time anymore to do things that they like. :(
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I have many things which I want to do in my free time.
>> I have many things that I want to do in my free time.
But I can\'t do in my limited free time what I want to do everything.
>> But I can\'t do them because I have very limited time.
For example, I want to learn piano and I want to study English more.
>> For example, I want to learn how to play the piano and study English more.
If I use my free time to be busy, it is not to enjoy my free time.
>> If I use my free time to be busy, I don\'t enjoy it.
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