Is there something you wish you could do with your free time but can’t?
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Good evening, Sir [이름]!
You are right! It is a matter of will.
People usually hesitate to do things.
Some of them just take their time.
While other make the most of their time even though it\'s difficult.
I guess we should be grateful for what we have and learn more.
It will help us be a better person and more successful.
We should make the most of our life. We should live like it is our last day.
Talk to you in class.
Teacher Nina
I’d like to try a lot things such as taking a golf lesson, playing drums, learning Chinese, taking overseas trips, etc.
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I think I can do those of activities in my free time, but I don’t.
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Thinking of why I don’t, it is because of my lack of will.
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If I have a strong will, I might try them regardless of how busy I’m.
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Lazy people make excuses such as no time, no money, difficult situation, etc.
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However, looking at successful people, they did achieve things in a more difficult situation.
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They made time to learn or try something, not because they had more free time.
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It is the all matter of will.
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The big difference between a successor and a failure is how you make time out of your hectic schedule.
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Time is limited and all the people have 24 hours a day, which is quite fair.
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But depending on how to manage time, you can use the 24 hours as 48 hours or a week.
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Thinking about the situation where you had to cram or finish a project by the due date, we wished to have more time.
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