Is there still a stigma around taking medication for one’s mood or brain?
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Is there still a stigma around taking medication for one’s mood or brain?
It is a difficult topic.
Because when I was started this job, I think it is unnecessary that take medication for cure one\'s mood or brain.
I heard that Medication control our brain and that is disturbed develop brain.
But now I have changed my [이름]d.
Because I saw many students who changed from take medication.
Nowadays many people have each problems.
Even if a bit problem, I recommend visit hospital and take medication.
강사 첨삭
Hi Angela,
I am glad that even when it is a hard question, you were able to answer the question well. Indeed we cannot predict the [이름]dset of everyone. What we need to do is to be with someone and learn the habit of listening. I am worried about the young generation, they are very fragile.
Aki~
It is a difficult topic.
>>> CORRECT!
Because when I was started this job, I think it is unnecessary that take medication for cure one\'s mood or brain.
>>> Because when I started this job, I thought it was unnecessary that take medication to cure one\'s mood or brain.
I heard that Medication control our brain and that is disturbed develop brain.
>>> I heard that medication controls our brain and that it disturbes to development of the brain.
But now I have changed my [이름]d.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I saw many students who changed from take medication.
>>> Because I saw many students who changed from taking medications.
Nowadays many people have each problems.
>>> Nowadays many people have a problem.
Even if a bit problem, I recommend visit hospital and take medication.
>>> Even if it\'s a bit problem, I recommend visiting the hospital and taking medication.
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