Is this an order of method to come up with making a word?

2014-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi there Debby :) Today? I was exhausted after exercising so I got the nap for 4 hours! My legs was shaking and I felt the pain from the back expecially. But after the nap, I feel great. Coming up with ideas first, and tenses. I also think that it is a best way of making a word. I haven't thought about the order... haha See you tommorow. Take care :D <Essay> I really think it is important to keep a promise. It is a matter of trust between each other. So we should keep that as possible as we can. If we have to break up a promise, we have to get sorry sincerely. I don't know if I've tired of breaking, but I feel there's several things before maybe.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ Happy Thursday!^^ I can\'t wait for the weekend and spend the gloomy day in bed! hahahaha You were talking about a past activity so your tenses must be in the past!^^ Try to practice putting yourself in a situation and use the proper tenses. No worries I still think that you expressed yourself well. I have always wondered how important promises are for Koreans.^^ Promise me you\'ll never stop studying English!^^ Take care^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hi there Debby :)>> CORRECT OR> Hi pretty Debby!^^ hahahaToday? I was exhausted after exercising so I got the nap for 4 hours! >>Today, I was exhausted after exercising so I got a nap for 4 hours! OR> I slept for about four hours after working out. My legs was shaking and I felt the pain from the back expecially. >> My legs were shaking and I felt the pain from the back expecially. (situation and the tense) But after the nap, I feel great.>> But after the nap, I felt great.Coming up with ideas first, and tenses. >> CORRECT OR> Thinking of the situation before applying the tenses.  I also think that it is a best way of making a word. >> CORRECT OR> I agree with that method. I haven\'t thought about the order... haha >> CORRECT OR> I never realized that order.See you tommorow. >> CORRECT Or> See you soon.Take care :D >> CORRECT OR> Take lots of care!^^<Essay>I really think it is important to keep a promise. >> CORRECT Or> I think that it is a must to keep a promise. It is a matter of trust between each other. >> CORRECT OR> It is a bond between two people. So we should keep that as possible as we can. >> CORRECTOr> We should try to keep it as much as we could. If we have to break up a promise, we have to get sorry sincerely. >>  If we have to break up a promise, we have to be sincerely sorry.  I don\'t know if I\'ve tired of breaking, but I feel there\'s several things before maybe. >> I don\'t know if I\'ve triedbreaking, but I feel there\'s several were things before maybe.  

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