Is this an order of method to come up with making a word?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there Debby :)
Today? I was exhausted after exercising so I got the nap for 4 hours! My legs was shaking and I felt the pain from the back expecially. But after the nap, I feel great.
Coming up with ideas first, and tenses. I also think that it is a best way of making a word. I haven't thought about the order... haha
See you tommorow.
Take care :D
<Essay>
I really think it is important to keep a promise. It is a matter of trust between each other. So we should keep that as possible as we can. If we have to break up a promise, we have to get sorry sincerely. I don't know if I've tired of breaking, but I feel there's several things before maybe.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
Happy Thursday!^^
I can\'t wait for the weekend and spend the gloomy day in bed! hahahaha
You were talking about a past activity so your tenses must be in the past!^^
Try to practice putting yourself in a situation and use the proper tenses.
No worries I still think that you expressed yourself well.
I have always wondered how important promises are for Koreans.^^
Promise me you\'ll never stop studying English!^^
Take care^^
^^T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hi there Debby :)>> CORRECT
OR> Hi pretty Debby!^^ hahahaToday? I was exhausted after exercising so I got the nap for 4 hours!
>>Today, I was exhausted after exercising so I got a nap for 4 hours!
OR> I slept for about four hours after working out.
My legs was shaking and I felt the pain from the back expecially.
>> My legs were shaking and I felt the pain from the back expecially. (situation and the tense)
But after the nap, I feel great.>> But after the nap, I felt great.Coming up with ideas first, and tenses.
>> CORRECT
OR> Thinking of the situation before applying the tenses.
I also think that it is a best way of making a word.
>> CORRECT
OR> I agree with that method.
I haven\'t thought about the order... haha
>> CORRECT
OR> I never realized that order.See you tommorow.
>> CORRECT
Or> See you soon.Take care :D
>> CORRECT
OR> Take lots of care!^^<Essay>I really think it is important to keep a promise.
>> CORRECT
Or> I think that it is a must to keep a promise.
It is a matter of trust between each other.
>> CORRECT
OR> It is a bond between two people.
So we should keep that as possible as we can.
>> CORRECTOr> We should try to keep it as much as we could.
If we have to break up a promise, we have to get sorry sincerely.
>> If we have to break up a promise, we have to be sincerely sorry.
I don\'t know if I\'ve tired of breaking, but I feel there\'s several things before maybe.
>> I don\'t know if I\'ve triedbreaking, but I feel there\'s several were things before maybe.
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