Is this the right way to say?

Hello, [이름]!

I just never thought that you played with your friends today.

You sounded like you really had fun with them.

I am glad you were happy.

That is so amazing!

Anyway, I am going to call you again later.

Enjoy the rest of your evening.

~Teacher Chloe

I played catch with my friends.

>>Correct!

It was fun.

>>Correct!

It was also hard because my friends were really fast runners.

>>It was also hard because my friends are really fast runners.

I had to run so fast to avoid them.

>>Correct!

OR:
>>I also had to run so fast to avoid them.

It was also for my exercise, because they are fast runners, I just have to run fast even I don\'t want to.

>>Because I wanted to exercise, I had to do it because they are fast runners.

I don\'t exercise that much, but with them, I can do my exercise easy and fun.

>>I don\'t exercise that much, but with them, my exercise is easy and fun.

I love playing with them.

>>Correct!

I want to play with them everyday.

>>Correct!

But I don\'t have time to play.

>>But, I don\'t have time to play with them everyday.

What can I do?

>>Correct!

Maybe I should ask to my mom and dad if I can play with my friends much.

>>Maybe, I will ask my parents whether I can play with them a lot or not.

They might allow me.

>>Correct!

I love playing with them.

>>Correct!