Is travel education?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. Travel is education. Because education is learning. We can travel and learn a lot. There are many things to learn, such as the way of life of each country or city, the language and dialect. And travel helps the world. Because I can travel and help people in need and do economic activities there.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
Yes. Travel is education.
>>> Yes. travel is education.
Because education is learning.
>>> CORRECT!
We can travel and learn a lot.
>>> CORRECT!
There are many things to learn, such as the way of life of each country or city, the language and dialect.
>>> There are many things to learn, such as the way of life of each country or city, the language, and dialect.
And travel helps the world.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I can travel and help people in need and do economic activities there.
>>> CORRECT!
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