Is unemployment a great problem where you live now? What do you think the role of the government is
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Is unemployment a great problem where you live now?
What do you think the role of the government is in regulating the unemployment situation in you country?
Unemployment has been always a big problem in everywhere.
However it is getting worse recently due to Corona 19.
According to an analysis in news article regarding unemployment in Korea.
it showed that the unemployment rate would hit 4.5 percent in April.
In this critical situation, I think that the government should monitor current economic status.
and specially, they should take a variety of actions which can lower the unemployment rate,
either thru actual monetary supports to the people or loosening/expanding the systems and policies that help unemployed workers.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Those are pretty good points you have made here.
Article usage is still the challenge.
These are common expressions that use a specific form of article.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Unemployment has been always a big problem in everywhere.
>> Unemployment has always been a big problem everywhere.
However it is getting worse recently due to Corona 19.
However it is getting worse recently due to Corona 19.
>> However, it is getting worse recently due to Corona 19.
According to an analysis in news article regarding unemployment in Korea. it showed that the unemployment rate would hit 4.5 percent in April.
According to an analysis in news article regarding unemployment in Korea. it showed that the unemployment rate would hit 4.5 percent in April.
>> According to an analysis in a news article regarding unemployment in Korea, unemployment rate would hit 4.5 percent in April.
In this critical situation, I think that the government should monitor current economic status.
In this critical situation, I think that the government should monitor current economic status.
>> In this critical situation, I think that the government should monitor the current economic status.
and specially, they should take a variety of actions which can lower the unemployment rate,
and specially, they should take a variety of actions which can lower the unemployment rate,
>> Most importantly, they should take a variety of actions which can lower the unemployment rate.
either thru actual monetary supports to the people or loosening/expanding the systems and policies that help unemployed workers.
either thru actual monetary supports to the people or loosening/expanding the systems and policies that help unemployed workers.
>> This could be done thru actual monetary support to the people or loosening/expanding the systems and policies that help unemployed workers.
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