Is voting more of a privilege or a responsibility?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the voting is a responsibility
We must practice one. Nobody should not think a privilige of each person because we are people in Korea.
If we don\'t think a responsibility and we are just planning to go anywhere or trip on the election day, we could not have a future and dream.
It is too important to set next goverment.
Lately, Korea is very confusing due to coronavirus. Despite confusing, many people voted last election day.
We hope to set new goverment right and be concentrated one.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. You\'re right. I completely agree, we have to vote to change our country.
- T. Beth
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I think the voting is a responsibility>>> I think voting is a responsibility.
We must practice one.
>>> We must practice it.
Nobody should not think a privilige of each person because we are people in Korea.
>>> Nobody should think it\'s just a privilege of each person because we are people in Korea.
If we don\'t think a responsibility and we are just planning to go anywhere or trip on the election day, we could not have a future and dream.
>>> If we don\'t think of it as a responsibility and we are just plan to go anywhere or trip on the election day, we could not have a future and dream.
It is too important to set next goverment.
>>> It is too important to set the next government.
>>> It is too important to set the next government.
Lately, Korea is very confusing due to coronavirus.
>>> correct
Despite confusing, many people voted last election day.
>>> Despite the confusion, many people voted last election day.
We hope to set new goverment right and be concentrated one.
>>> We hope to set the new government right and be concentrated on it.
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