Is voting the right or the duty?
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I don\'t think that voting is the duty of the people in the country.
It just is the right of the people.
Duties have legal factors, so if we reject to vote, we have to be punished.
However, we are not punished for not voting.
As a person who lives in my country we have to vote.
That is because voting is very strong right.
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I don\'t think that voting is the duty of the people in the country.
>> Correct
It just is the right of the people.
It just is the right of the people.
>> Correct
Duties have legal factors, so if we reject to vote, we have to be punished.
Duties have legal factors, so if we reject to vote, we have to be punished.
>> Duties have legal effects, so if we reject to vote, we have to be punished.
However, we are not punished for not voting.
However, we are not punished for not voting.
>> Correct
As a person who lives in my country we have to vote.
As a person who lives in my country we have to vote.
>> As a person who lives in my country, I have to vote.
That is because voting is very strong right.
That is because voting is very strong right.
>> That is because voting is a very important right.
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