Is what's on the inside more important than what's on the outside?

Hi there, [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework!

I couldn\'t agree more with what you said here.

There should be a balance between the two.

We cannot look good on the outside, but ugly on the inside.

And we need to stop judging people based on their looks.

I would like to share this quote by Sophia Loren, \"Beauty is how you feel inside, and it reflects in your eyes. It is not something physical.\"

Please review my corrections here.

Talk to you tomorrow!

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~Teacher Marie~^^

I think both sides, inside and outside, are important equally to humans.

>> I think both sides, the inside and the outside, are equally important to humans.
 A conservative person said that inside of human is more important than outside.

>> A conservative person would say that what\'s inside a human is more important than what\'s on the outside.
 I agree to the opinion in some ways. 

>> I agree with this opinion, in some way.
 However, I think appearance, behaviors and using words are all important to evaluate someone.

>> However, I think that the appearance, behavior, and the manner of speaking are all important to evaluate someone.

Although he did good activities, it could be likely to underestimate his work when he was dirty or used bad language.

>> Although he is doing good things, it is likely to be underestimated when he uses dirty or bad language.
 Therefore, it is important to balance between inside and outside in humans.

>> Therefore, it is important to balance the inside and outside of humans.