Is window shopping a total waste of time? What is the thing you forget most often when you go shoppi
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I definitely agree with you Sir [이름].
Women really love window shopping.
There is a feeling of relaxation as you mentioned and they feel much better once they purchased an item.
I am guilty in buying unnecessary things when I go window shopping. Hihihihi.
The important thing is that we can see better things when we go around the mall or department stores.
Have a nice day.
Teacher Nina
Many people like window shopping although they do not have any specific item to buy.
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>> OR: Many people like window shopping although they do not have any specific item to purchase.
It’s one of their hobbies too.
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Especially women love to just stroll by, see all the products and give new clothes or fancy stuff a light touch.
>> Did you mean: Especially women just love to stroll, see all the products and give new clothes or fancy stuff a light touch.
They feel happy about going window shopping.
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They often feel relaxed and stressed out when they just hang around at the malls or department stores.
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The bright spot lights, chandeliers, the shiny marble floors at the department stores make them feel that they are leading actors in a movie or a play.
>> The bright spot lights, chandeliers, the shiny marble floors at the department stores make them feel that they are leading actors/ actresses in a movie or a play.
Who does not like having such feelings?
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>> OR: Who does not like having those feelings?
Window shopping can give more broad idea what stuff is the best in quality as well as price.
>> Window shopping can give a broader idea what stuff is the best in quality as well as the price.
Sometimes you get to explore many choice by window shopping and have a luck to get a good buy.
>> Sometimes you get to explore many choices by window shopping and have a luck to get a good buy.
Addiction or excessive time spending on shopping or window shopping should be refrained, however, the moderate level of window shopping is not bad.
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The side effect of window shopping is that you often end up buying unnecessary things.
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