Is winter fashion uncomfortable?
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I often enjoy winter fashion, but I usually feel uncomfortable. There are a lot of thick clothes, so it\'s uncomfortable to move. When you have to put your coat in your bag, there are situations where your clothes are too bulky to fit in your bag. Therefore, I feel uncomfortable with winter fashion.
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I often enjoy winter fashion, but I usually feel uncomfortable.
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There are a lot of thick clothes, so it\'s uncomfortable to move.
>> Winter clothes are often thick and heavy, which makes it hard to move.
OR >> Thick winter clothes make movement difficult.
When you have to put your coat in your bag, there are situations where your clothes are too bulky to fit in your bag.
>> When you try to put a coat in your bag, it doesn’t always fit because winter clothes are thick.
OR >> Sometimes it’s hard to fit a coat into a bag because winter clothes are bulky.
Therefore, I feel uncomfortable with winter fashion.
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