Is your country gay-friendly?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is a neutral problem in my country.
Some regions have a politic that we cannot judge them.
This politic says that we should respect their philosophy.
However, many people disagree with this politic.
Also, I don\'t like to accept it because I am a Christian.
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Hello, Chloe!
Here are the corrections.
I think it is a neutral problem in my country.
>>Correct!
Some regions have a politic that we cannot judge them.
>>Some regions have policies that we cannot judge them.
This politic says that we should respect their philosophy.
>>These policies say that we should respect their philosophy.
However, many people disagree with this politic.
>>However, many people disagree with this policy.
Also, I don\'t like to accept it because I am a Christian.
>>Also, I don\'t like to accept it because I am a Christian.
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