Is your country gay-friendly?
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I don’t think Korea has a gay-friendly culture. Compared with past, it’s getting better to open them, but still has a negative view. Gay is not a choice, it’s a natural part.
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Hello, [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
I don’t think Korea has a gay-friendly culture.
>>Correct!
Compared with past, it’s getting better to open them, but still has a negative view.
>>Compared with the past, it’s getting better to open them, but still has a negative view.
Gay is not a choice, it’s a natural part.
>>Being a gay is not a choice, it\'s a natural part of existence.
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