Is your personality suited to your job? Why or why not
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Well, I didn\'t have think whether personality suited to me or not so far.
>> Well, I never thought whether my personality suits my job or not.
When I first started to work at my company, I just worked hard at that point of time.
>> When I first started to work in my company, I just worked hard at that point of time.
As you know, we difficult to join a company after graduation from colleges at that time.
>> As you know, it was difficult to join a company after graduating.
In my case, I joined the company earlier than another students because I started work at the company during the semester.
>> In my case, I joined the company earlier than another students because I started to work at the company during the semester.
I was a lucky guy.
>> CORRECT
I was so happy to heard that I got a good news from the company.
>> I was so happy to hear the good news I got from the company.
I really thankfully everything after I got the result at that point of time.
>> I was really thankful for everything after I got the result at that point of time.
So that, I didn\'t have think whether personality suited to me or not.
>> So, I never thought whether my personality suits my job or not.
I must be joined the company because it was really difficult stuff.
>> They must have hired me because it was really difficult.
But now, I think that why I do work hard for what and who.
>> However, I am thinking why I work hard, what and who do I work for.
So, I try to have a time for me to healthy in good condition or studying something.
>> So, I try to have some time for me to study about something and to be in good health.
I thankful that I can work in good workplace.
>> I am thankful that I am working in a good place.
I don\'t have any greed and I wish work in my company until my kids finished the school.
>> I am not greedy and I wish I can work here in this company until my kids finish school.
From now on, I hope working hard for about 15 years.
>> I have been working hard for about 15 years now.
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