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Good evening [이름] Woo!
Thanks for sending me your homework early.
And I heard about the house pricing in your country and it\'s really a fortune.
I hope there would be a solution to that.
Thank you!
i think the serious issue in korea is housing price because it is getting higher fastly
>>I think the serious problem in Korea is the housing price because it is rising fast.
i mean, that is terrible price cus many young people can never buy it
>>I mean, it\'s a terrible price that many young people can never buy.
it is one of the biggest problems in korea
>>It is one of the biggest problems in Korea.
i think if the goverment let it go, in the future, some people will be stressed, some people will argue with each other
>>I think if the government will let it go, some people will get stressed and some people will argue with each other.
and some people may have a hard time to maintain thier life.
>>And some people may have a hard time maintaining their lives.
but the thing is that\'s an ongoing so this problem will get serious
>>But the problem is that it\'s going to get serious because it\'s going on.
but i don\'t think any solutions to resolve it so the goverment make a solution ASAP
>>But I don\'t think there\'s any solution, so the government should do something ASAP.
making a solution is not easy but i hope that the goverment does not give up and keep trying
>>Making a solution is not easy, but I hope the government will not give up and keep trying.
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