It' about my interview

I'm in AUS I'm preparing to apply for jop as a house keeper.Tomorrow I'm going to take an interview with manager.But I don't know if my sentenes is correct. plz correct my sentenses. I think when it comes to housekeeping the most important things r Cleanliness , hygiene , communication with costomer , greeting and smile.I'm happy to make people happy with the services I provide. after I gradeated I've worked in the small motel as housekeeper. although I worked for short time I enjoyed housekeeping. that time I made beds , clean rooms , organized facility and dealt with clients room service.Housekeeper prepares room for tourist to stay . like making beds, cleaning rooms, orgaizing.

Hi [이름]!

I just finished reading your composition. Just remember this, be confident in expressing yourself especially your ideas using the English language. Dont forget to smile ok?  Think positive and I hope you'll be able to get the job. Good luck for tomorrow!

=p Teacher Judy  =p

I'm in AUS

>> I'm in Australia.
I'm preparing to apply for jop as a house keeper.

>> I am preparing to apply for a job as a house keeper.

Tomorrow I'm going to take an interview with manager.

>> Tomorrow, I am going to take a phone interview with the house keeper manager.

But I don't know if my sentenes is correct.

>> But I don't know if my sentences are correct.

 plz correct my sentenses.

>> Please correct them.
I think when it comes to housekeeping the most important things r Cleanliness , hygiene , communication with costomer , greeting and smile.

>> I think that the essential things when it comes to good housekeeping are cleanliness, hygiene, good communication with the customers, a nice greeting and most of all, a warm smile.

I'm happy to make people happy with the services I provide.

>> I am happy whenever I see people happy with the service i give.
after I gradeated I've worked in the small motel as housekeeper.

>> After I graduated, I worked as a housekeeper in a small motel.

although I worked for short time I enjoyed housekeeping.

>> Although I worked for a short time, I enjoyed my job as a housekeeper.

that time I made beds , clean rooms , organized facility and dealt with clients room service.

>> I make up beds, clean their rooms, organized their facility and dealt with the clients needs for room service.

Housekeeper prepares room for tourist to stay .

>> Housekeepers prepares room for the tourist to stay.
like making beds, cleaning rooms, orgaizing.

>> like making beds, cleaning rooms and organizing.