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Many movie or tellevision program show us an interesting scenario about gambling.
Most of the programs make a situation that main charactor have a father who failed his life because of gambling. Paradoxically, the main charactor not want to be gambler but finnally find he have a talent for gambling innately.
so he became a gambler and succeed in it.
In real There are lots of people who succeeded in gambling, Of course their sons
But These story make us misunderstand that the ability of gambling is inherited by his parents.
I think their son became a gambler not because of the inherited ablity but because of the exposure frequency of gambling.
Naturally, their son have a many chance to get a gamble.
So, that makes their son be a gambler.
You can see many cases which about the occupasions that Son follow the father's job.
So that is the reason. father affects their son so much specially on liing pattern
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Hi there again [이름]!
I appreciate that you shared this story today.
I think you are right, but it also depends on the person.
We are different from each other. ^_^
Gambling is addictive so we should now the disadavantages of it.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Take Care!Teacher Nina
Many movie or tellevision program show us an interesting scenario about gambling.
>> Many movies or television programs show us an interesting scenario about gambling.Most of the programs make a situation that main charactor have a father who failed his life because of gambling.
>> Most of the programs make a situation that the main character has a father who failed in his life because of gambling.
Paradoxically, the main charactor not want to be gambler but finnally find he have a talent for gambling innately.
>> Paradoxically, the main character does not want to be a gambler. but he found out that he has a talent in gambling. so he became a gambler and succeed in it.
>> CorrectIn real There are lots of people who succeeded in gambling, Of course their sons
>> In reality, there are lots of people who succeed in it, of course their sons too. But These story make us misunderstand that the ability of gambling is inherited by his parents.
>> But this story makes us misunderstand that the ability of gambling is inherited from his parents/ I think their son became a gambler not because of the inherited ablity but because of the exposure frequency of gambling.
>> I think their son became a gambler not because he inherited it, but because of too much exposure in gambling.Naturally, their son have a many chance to get a gamble.
>> Naturally, their son has a lot of chances to gamble. So, that makes their son be a gambler.
>> Correct
>> So, that makes him (son) a gambler.You can see many cases which about the occupasions that Son follow the father\'s job.
>> You can see in many cases such as the occupation, the son follows his father\'s job. So that is the reason. father affects their son so much specially on liing pattern
>> So for that reason, a father affects his son especially in adopting a lifestyle.
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