It is a chance to get a wide relationship with various people.
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In my case, there are many people who get a various job and age in my tennis club.
>>In my case, there are many people who get various jobs and have different ages in my tennis club.
In that club, I can know different field of job that I haven\'t know and I can get a opportunity to extend my insight about a life.
>>In that club, I can know different field of jobs that I haven\'t known and I can get an opportunity to widen my insights about life.
It is interesting for me.
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And we can make new friends.
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It is also good opportunity for us, because ,actually, it is difficult after we graduate university and since we got a job.
>>It is also a good opportunity for us because actually, it is difficult after we graduate from our university and since we already got a job.
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