It is a top secret of company the way of salary increasing of employees.

2020-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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How are employees in your company given a raise? Well, it is a top secret of company. ^^;. - the end - I can say that most of the company have a one salary increasing per year. You worked a year and you could receive evaluation from board members of your company. They decide your grade. And they decide ratio of increasing next year. Then according to your evaluated grade you would receive increasing salary. But it can\'t reflect all persons performance. So if you have really good results during the working you can receive addition compensation a middle of year. And if you have extreme performance compared with others you can receive award with large money at end of the year.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir JY! Thank you for this. I guess hard work pays off.
- T. Beth
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Well, it is a top secret of company. ^^;.
- the end -
>>> correct
>>> OR: Well, it is quite confidential.
I can say that most of the company have a one salary increasing per year. 
>>> OR: I can say that most of the companies have a salary increase every year.    
You worked a year and you could receive evaluation from board members of your company. 
>>>  correct 
They decide your grade. 
>>>  correct 
And they decide ratio of increasing next year. 
>>>  OR: And they decide on the ratio of increase next year.  
Then according to your evaluated grade you would receive increasing salary.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Then according to your evaluation, you would receive an increase in your salary.  
But it can\'t reflect all persons performance.
>>>  correct 
 So if you have really good results during the working you can receive addition compensation a middle of year. 
>>>  So if you have really good results while working, you can receive additional compensation in the middle of the year.   
And if you have extreme performance compared with others you can receive award with large money at end of the year.
>>> And if you have extreme performance compared with others you can receive an award with large money at the end of the year.  

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