it is a very interesting question
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if I have chance to change my gender
I would like to go a woman bathhouse.. I was hopping when I was young
I imagined many time that I would like to live other person as woman
but not anymore
and now that is not interesting anymore..
I love my life as living a man
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Hello [이름]!
Another great answer!
I hope you have time to read the corrections to improve on your English skills!
See you next week!
Happy weekend!
if I have chance to change my gender, I would like to go a woman bathhouse..
>>If I have a chance to change my gender, I would go to a women\'s bathhouse.
I was hopping when I was young
>>I was hoping when I was young.
>>I imagined many times that I would like to live as a woman.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
>>I love my life as a man.
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