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People tend to comment a good word to person who treats them respectfully and kindly. In other words, those people who mastered important social skills have more advantages than the others. In my experience, I learned the social skills by playing soccer with friends as well as an amature team, and being the president in my classroom. With the skills, I could make many friends. Surprisingly, however, one of my friends recommanded me to work with famous singers such as Bigbang, Maroon 5, and Ladygaga even if I was not close with her and doubt that my abilities was adequate to the job. Morerover, I could get admired by people whoever I work together. The other skills such as critical and logical thinking probably have own advantages. However, teaching various subjects and social skills has more benefits than the others in student's future.

Thank you for doing your homework! Great job for today! I am impressed of your composition Keep it up! I know you will improve a lot with your English skills because of the determination you give in studying. I\'ll see you later in class. Enjoy the day ahead! Take care! -------T. Chloe------- People tend to comment a good word to person who treats them respectfully and kindly. >>>People tend to give a good comment to a person who treats them with respect and kindness. In other words, those people who mastered important social skills have more advantages than the others. >>>CORRECT! In my experience, I learned the social skills by playing soccer with friends as well as an amature team, and being the president in my classroom. >>>CORRECT! With the skills, I could make many friends. >>>With these skills, I could make friends. Surprisingly, however, >>>CORRECT! one of my friends recommanded me to work with famous singers such as Bigbang, Maroon 5, and Ladygaga even if I was not >>>CORRECT! >>>**careful with the way you spell the word \"recommended\" close with her and doubt that my abilities was adequate to the job. >>>close with them and I doubted the adequacy of my abilities for the job. Morerover, I could get admired by people whoever I work together. >>>Moreover, I could get admiration from the people that I work with.The other skills such as critical and logical thinking probably have own advantages. >>>The other skills such as critical and logical thinking probably have their own advantages. However, teaching various subjects and social skills has more benefits than the others in student\'s future. >>>However, teaching various subjects and social skills is more benefitial to a student\'s future compared to other skills.