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2022-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Hi Charry! I have been learning English with Power English since 2015. I can not feel how much improvement my English by myself. But I am able to express and speak to foreigners. Of course I still should make an effort to study. I am sometimes afraid of Reptiles, amphibians and cockroaches. Actually, my country politicians and high-ranking government officials are corrupted and building up their power and money. so I\'m afraid my country will be ruined by them.

강사 첨삭

Hello, William! ^^
Thank you for diligently answering our essay question for today. I think you\'re brave four facing your fears, whether it be studying English, reptiles, amphibians, insects or corrupt officials.
I hope you continue to do your best despite your fears.
See you again next time. ^^
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry

Hi Charry!

>> Hi, Charry!

I have been learning English with Power English since 2015.

>> CORRECT!

I can not feel how much improvement my English by myself.

>> If I were to evaluate my self, I am honestly unsure whether I improved or not.

But I am able to express and speak to foreigners.

>> But I am now able to express my self and speak to foreigners.

Of course I still should make an effort to study.

>> CORRECT!

I am sometimes afraid of Reptiles, amphibians and cockroaches.

>> I am sometimes afraid of reptiles, amphibians and cockroaches.

Actually, my country politicians and high-ranking government officials are corrupted and building up their power and money.

>> Actually, my country\'s politicians and high-ranking government officials are corrupt and only care about building up their power and money.

so I\'m afraid my country will be ruined by them.

>> So, I\'m afraid my country will be ruined by them.

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