It is best time for me when I play the viloin.
학생이 쓴 원문
I play the viloin during the day time.
Sometimes, I go to the garaoke when I have free time.
When I go to there I sing a several song.
Korean culture is good.
Ancient Greek culture influenced others in almost every way.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. I can see you did most of your homework. I appreciate that and continue improving your skills. ^_^
It is best time for me when I play the viloin.
>>>It is best time for me when I play the violin.
Sometimes, I go to the garaoke when I have free time.
>>>Sometimes, I go to a karaoke bar when I have free time.
When I go to there I sing a several song.
>>>When I go to there, I sing a several songs.
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