It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.
학생이 쓴 원문
It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.
Big city\'s grow up good things:
다양한 문화 체험을 할 수 있다.음악회 미술 전시회 체육활동
It could be experience many thing are various. for example music concert, exihbition, sports camp.
Countryside grow up good things:
There are good for health that are a helpful nature, ground, tree,forest fresh air.
강사 첨삭
Great Monday to you Ms. [Name] se!
This is the first day of another busy week and I hope that you were able to start the week right.
Be positive and always be happy.
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Big city\'s grow up good things:
Big city\'s grow up good things:
>>There are many advantages if you will grow up in the city.
It could be experience many thing are various. for example music concert, exihbition, sports camp.
It could be experience many thing are various. for example music concert, exihbition, sports camp.
>>You can experience many things like concerts, exhibition, and sports camp.
Countryside grow up good things:
Countryside grow up good things:
>>There are also many good things in the countryside.
There are good for health that are a helpful nature, ground, tree,forest fresh air.
There are good for health that are a helpful nature, ground, tree,forest fresh air.
>>Living in the countryside is good because of the fresh air.
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