It is better for colleagues or classmates to communicate in person than through emails or telephones

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I recommend a communication in person rather than using a messenger like a telephone, a e-mail in doing a project if it is possible because it is more efficient and can prevent miscommunications.

>> I personally want to talk to a person rather than sending a message through messengers, calling over the mobile phone, sending an e-mail to make a project because it\'s more convenient and it prevents miscommunication.
First, you can save more time to finish a project.

>> Firstly, you can converse time to finish a project.

If you meet your coworkers or friends, they can communicate and obtain the answers about your questions instantly, and therefore you don\'t need to wait until replying.

>> You can get answers instantly rather than waiting for their replies.

In addition, in case of using E-mail you don\'t know when the replying is coming.

>> In addition, you don\'t know when will you receive a reply from them.
Second, a communication in person preclude the mis-communication because you can get diverse information from meeting such as gestures, tone of voice and memos so you can clearly understand other\'s thought. 

>> Second, it can also lead to miscommunication because you don\'t see the gestures and the tone of voice of the person you are talking to.
In conclusion, unless you cannot meet your coworkers ar friends in person because of like distance, meeting directly is better way.

>> In conclusion, talking personally with a person is better than using other means of communication.