It is better to be a follower then a leader.
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I disagree.
Both are good, but if you become a follower, you have to follow what you do not want, so it will be a burden of responsibility, but I think the leader is better.
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I disagree.
>> CORRECT
Both are good, but if you become a follower, you have to follow what you do not want, so it will be a burden of responsibility, but I think the leader is better.
>> Both are good. However, if you will become a follower, then you have to follow the things you do not want to do so it will be a burden of responsibility. I think being a leader is much better.
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