It is better to have own plan.

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For me, I think it\'s better to travel in groups in order for you to have fun with other people too. Hihihi.

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Teacher Nina

When you have a trip to abroad, Maybe It is better to make personal plan but not depandant on travel company.

>> When you have a trip abroad, maybe it is better to make a personal plan and not depend on travel agencies.
As a person who already experience an abroad trip in both ways,going trip with company is little uncomfortable for me.

>> As a person who already experienced a trip abroad, going on a trip with an agency is a bit uncomfortable for me.

The tendancy or goal of travel, like making abroad friends, visiting historical place, experiencing real culture of abroad is in your mind.

>> The goal of traveling is making friends abroad, visiting historical place and experiencing others\' culture abroad is in your mind.

>> OR: The goal of traveling is making friends abroad, visiting historical place and experiencing others\' culture abroad is in your hands/
So, when you make a plan through company, you can find it easily to yeild one of your goal because Company needs to do as a group.

>> So when you make a plan through a company/ agency, you can find it easy to yield one of your goals because it needs to be done in groups.

It can limit your personal satisfaction or experience.

>> Correct
Of course company protect you from uncertain situation like being ripped off or lost in street.

>> Of course, the company/ agency protects you from uncertain situation like being ripped off or lost in the street.
buy you should knmow It is also one part of trip and It can be a precious memory which gives you a true meaning.

>> But you should also now that it is also a part of the trip and it can be a precious memory, which gives you the true meaning of traveling.