It is better to never risk at all?
학생이 쓴 원문
Truth be told, I disagree with this opinion. Especially for youngsters, so as to live proactively, sometimes taking the risk is beneficial in many ways. I mean through risks, they can learn on how to deal with the situation and they can experience something that cannot buy money. I believe even though it would be useless at times, it is not useless for people.
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Good evening [이름]!
Taking risks is a part of our lives. If we do not take a leap of faith or try something out of our comfort zones, learning can be difficult. So at times, taking bold risks is necessary so when we succeed, we can rejoice and if we fail, we still learned.
Thanks for sharing this answer. I shall see you again in class next week.
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-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Especially for youngsters, so as to live proactively, sometimes taking the risk is beneficial in many ways.
>> Correct!
I mean through risks, they can learn on how to deal with the situation and they can experience something that cannot buy money.
>> I mean through risks, they can learn on how to deal with the situation and they can experience something that money cannot buy.
I believe even though it would be useless at times, it is not useless for people.
>> Correct!
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