It is convient for us to use the message.
학생이 쓴 원문
Sns is quick and convient.
Machine is very good in these days.
SNS plays a mediational role recently.
Facebook is the world’s largest SNS.
I often see the facebook.
Thanks for reading.
bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for taking the time to make your homework. You did a great job expressing your thoughts through writing. Keep it up!^_^
Sns is quick and convient.
>>>SNS is quick and convenient.
Machine is very good in these days.
Machine is very good in these days.
>>> Machine is very good these days.
OR>>>Technology is easy to use these days.
SNS plays a mediational role recently.
SNS plays a mediational role recently.
>>>CORRECT!
>>> SNS plays a role of mediation recently.
Facebook is the world’s largest SNS.
Facebook is the world’s largest SNS.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>The world’s largest SNS is Facebook.
I often see the facebook.
I often see the facebook.
>>> I often log in to Facebook .
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